Wednesday, March 12, 2008

nycrostic 4

nycrostic 4

bathed in an
already set sun's
teasing exit,
traversing the
edge of ms liberty's
regally outstreched
youthful arm with well

placed pink fingers,
arranging her curls,
rubbing her shoulders,
kissing her goodnight.

4 comments:

SN said...

I feel like you've really found your voice with these nycrostics: reverential, poetic, compressed, and clearly deeply felt.

Ruby K said...

thanks SN! kinda how i feel about this town, so i'm glad it translates well.

chillul Who? said...

amazing. i'm speechless. you said everything.

Anonymous said...

Who knew oxidized copper could be so sexy?